From 16498dc8ef494657a481e3b791edd05c9a1e77e8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SomaticFanatic <49295085+SomaticFanatic@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 1 Oct 2019 02:32:32 +0000 Subject: simplewallet.cpp - clean up welcome message Fixed a typo ("and -are- not visible to the world by default"), removed a few redundant commas, and capitalized words inside the URL. --- src/simplewallet/simplewallet.cpp | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/simplewallet/simplewallet.cpp b/src/simplewallet/simplewallet.cpp index f07d142fb..1858383bf 100644 --- a/src/simplewallet/simplewallet.cpp +++ b/src/simplewallet/simplewallet.cpp @@ -2157,8 +2157,8 @@ bool simple_wallet::welcome(const std::vector &args) message_writer() << tr("Welcome to Monero, the private cryptocurrency."); message_writer() << ""; message_writer() << tr("Monero, like Bitcoin, is a cryptocurrency. That is, it is digital money."); - message_writer() << tr("Unlike Bitcoin, your Monero transactions and balance stay private, and not visible to the world by default."); - message_writer() << tr("However, you have the option of making those available to select parties, if you choose to."); + message_writer() << tr("Unlike Bitcoin, your Monero transactions and balance stay private and are not visible to the world by default."); + message_writer() << tr("However, you have the option of making those available to select parties if you choose to."); message_writer() << ""; message_writer() << tr("Monero protects your privacy on the blockchain, and while Monero strives to improve all the time,"); message_writer() << tr("no privacy technology can be 100% perfect, Monero included."); @@ -2166,7 +2166,7 @@ bool simple_wallet::welcome(const std::vector &args) message_writer() << tr("Flaws in Monero may be discovered in the future, and attacks may be developed to peek under some"); message_writer() << tr("of the layers of privacy Monero provides. Be safe and practice defense in depth."); message_writer() << ""; - message_writer() << tr("Welcome to Monero and financial privacy. For more information, see https://getmonero.org/"); + message_writer() << tr("Welcome to Monero and financial privacy. For more information see https://GetMonero.org"); return true; } -- cgit v1.2.3